bombs

Posted on December 3, 2012 by Deleted User
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1 Response to bombs

  1. Maddie m says:
    December 9, 2012 at 2:57 pm

    Hi Eve
    I really enjoyed reading your work because you told me what bombs were like.The one improvement would be two times you put ‘were’ when it should be ‘where’. Apart from that well done!!!
    from Maddie M

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