Zombies

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  1. Mrs Cohen says:

    Rafi, you have such a wonderful imagination and your use of words to bring that imagination alive is incredible.

    I now have a 2 challenges for you:
    1. Can you write several chapters of a longer piece of writing?
    Instead of writing short pieces that often end with a cliff hanger can you start to draw a link between your writing and write several chapters of the same story, developing your characters and storyline?
    2. Can you develop your non-fiction writing so that it is the same standard as your fiction writing?
    It is often difficult to get that ‘wow’ factor in non-fiction writing as we don’t have the same tools that we have in our narrative writing, such as figurative language, juicy adjectives etc. but we need our non-fiction to pack just as much punch as our fiction!
    So… do you accept the challenges?

  2. Bert says:

    Hi Rafi
    I really like the idear for putting the rhyming poem at the beggining where did you get the idea for it?I really liked your description of the Zombies.

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