What an interesting piece of writing. At first I thought this was about a sporting event and wondered what an old computer had to do with it. You build up the plot beautifully and have selected some excellent adverbs and adjectives. I would like to read more of this story.
Jessica,
I liked how you used your imagination on that. I really wanted to hear the whole story to find out what happened before all of the sad stuff began!
Hi Jessica,
What an interesting piece of writing. At first I thought this was about a sporting event and wondered what an old computer had to do with it. You build up the plot beautifully and have selected some excellent adverbs and adjectives. I would like to read more of this story.
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Jessica,
I liked how you used your imagination on that. I really wanted to hear the whole story to find out what happened before all of the sad stuff began!