Hi Rafi , I like your kenning especially the thing where you list some of the players but I don’t think everyone ,like I don’t know, knows who they are.
I thought you did a great piece of work I really in joyed reading it and I learnt you liked Manchester United. But I didn’t get when you said Eric Cantona, David Beckham?
To Rafi
I like your keening and the line ‘Newmayar wanters’. Next time carry the whole keening through on each line.
AND ALSO CHANGE THE MAN UNITED TO ARSENAL!!!
well done I like how you used a kenning poem I did not get it when you said and …. gorge best gorge who ?
Hi,
I really like ryming like lover and hater
I also really like your opinion of Rooney lover
Next time try to use alliteration.
Hi Rafi , I like your kenning especially the thing where you list some of the players but I don’t think everyone ,like I don’t know, knows who they are.
To Rafi ,
I thought you did a great piece of work I really in joyed reading it and I learnt you liked Manchester United. But I didn’t get when you said Eric Cantona, David Beckham?
Ava
I agree Ava. Those to names are Footballers on Man United I think
To Rafi
I like your keening and the line ‘Newmayar wanters’. Next time carry the whole keening through on each line.
AND ALSO CHANGE THE MAN UNITED TO ARSENAL!!!