My world

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2 Responses to My world

  1. Milla says:

    Hi Nathalie
    great creative post that sounds like a great world to me! I look forward to reading your next work
    Milla

  2. Gabriella says:

    Hi Nathalie,
    I loved your poem! It was brilliant!!!
    Your talent for poetry writing really shinned through in this poem, as it dose in all of your pieces. I agree with Milla, your world does seem great! Your rhyming words really pair up wonderfully and your creative ideas a really great! I wonder what it would be like with no gravity? Probably very fun! And it would be great if there were no more nightmares.

    I really look forwards to reading your next piece of writing! Great work!!!

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