Thats a very sweet story Clem! I like the name Arthur christmas, but maybe Santa needs some dog lessons
as you said he did not know how to look after dogs! I like how arthur and Rudolf became best friends.
However, next time you could try and add in a few commas where you mite need them!
Good Work!
Hi Clem
Nice work I like the names and the moral of the story but I think you could have slowed down a bit as it was a very short story but well done I look forward to reading your next peice of work
From Milla
Thats a very sweet story Clem! I like the name Arthur christmas, but maybe Santa needs some dog lessons
as you said he did not know how to look after dogs! I like how arthur and Rudolf became best friends.
However, next time you could try and add in a few commas where you mite need them!
Good Work!
Hi Clem
Nice work I like the names and the moral of the story but I think you could have slowed down a bit as it was a very short story but well done I look forward to reading your next peice of work
From Milla