Wow Lola! What is inside the shed? That is a very imaginative story and made me want to read on! I liked it when you said ‘I was frozen on the spot, I could not move.’ At the end you really build up suspense. Can’t wait to hear more!
Lola,
That was a really nice piece of work. I liked your adjectives. I am excited for it to be continued.
Ava
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Wow Lola! What is inside the shed? That is a very imaginative story and
made me want to read on! I liked it when you said ‘I was frozen on the spot, I could
not move.’ At the end you really build up suspense. Can’t wait to hear more!
Lola,
That was a really nice piece of work. I liked your adjectives. I am excited for it to be continued.
Ava