Hello Ben and thank you for taking part in the Night Zookeeper’s 100wc, although I’m not sure if he’d like that the car is electrocuting those small fish! You’ve created an imaginative piece of writing, but do remember to check through your spellings before you publish – can you spot any words that need correcting?
Keep on blogging!
Mr Kenyon 🙂 http://www.ashclass2012-13.blogspot.com
WOW well done Ben this is a good 100 word challenge, I really enjoy your story as it made me wont to know what will happen next about the wter car. Story like this are really good as they hook the reader like your story did to. Keep up the great work and keep on blogging.
From your friend Emily 6D http://www.@highlawnprimary.net
Hello Ben, this is a good piece of writing, which held my interest. Well done.
I’ll try to help you with just one mistake. It should be “if you were in it” Where belongs with here and there.
Hello Ben and thank you for taking part in the Night Zookeeper’s 100wc, although I’m not sure if he’d like that the car is electrocuting those small fish! You’ve created an imaginative piece of writing, but do remember to check through your spellings before you publish – can you spot any words that need correcting?
Keep on blogging!
Mr Kenyon 🙂
http://www.ashclass2012-13.blogspot.com
WOW well done Ben this is a good 100 word challenge, I really enjoy your story as it made me wont to know what will happen next about the wter car. Story like this are really good as they hook the reader like your story did to. Keep up the great work and keep on blogging.
From your friend Emily 6D http://www.@highlawnprimary.net
Hello Ben, this is a good piece of writing, which held my interest. Well done.
I’ll try to help you with just one mistake. It should be “if you were in it” Where belongs with here and there.
Keep on writing.