100 WC – The Bag

Posted on December 17, 2012 by Deleted User
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1 Response to 100 WC – The Bag

  1. Gabriella says:
    January 1, 2013 at 6:02 pm

    Hi Sophie,
    I really liked that story! At the beginning it made me wonder what was
    inside the bag. It also built up suspense when the bag got stolen. Next time
    maby try and put in different connectives.
    Well Done!!!!!

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