Hi Jamie,
Great little story you produced there! You have some good personifications like
‘shows no mercy to anything’ or ‘the toaster is a mean bread killing robot.’ I like the
way you make the toaster seem like a monster or a deadly robot. However some things
don’t make sense and in some places you forgot a capital letter.
Great story!!!!!
Hi Jamie,
Great little story you produced there! You have some good personifications like
‘shows no mercy to anything’ or ‘the toaster is a mean bread killing robot.’ I like the
way you make the toaster seem like a monster or a deadly robot. However some things
don’t make sense and in some places you forgot a capital letter.
Great story!!!!!