Well done, Lauren.
I think that your ideas are very imaginative and your story telling style is very engaging. You start sentences in different ways and use punctuation well. There are just a few small errors so make sure you give yourself time to check.
Keep writing – and Happy Christmas!
well done you should be very impresd with your imagination your ideas put an picture in my head
nice discription Lauren keep it up!
well done it was very good xx loved every second of it xx.
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Well done, Lauren.
I think that your ideas are very imaginative and your story telling style is very engaging. You start sentences in different ways and use punctuation well.
There are just a few small errors so make sure you give yourself time to check.
Keep writing – and Happy Christmas!
well done you should be very impresd with your imagination your ideas put an picture in my head
nice discription Lauren keep it up!
well done it was very good xx loved every second of it xx.