Hi Maddie P I liked the way you put what you learnt, your daily life and worries ine different paragraphs. the only improvements would be from is ‘from’ not ‘form’ and your ‘I’ should be in capitals from maddie m
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Hi Maddie P
I liked the way you put what you learnt, your daily life and worries ine different paragraphs.
the only improvements would be from is ‘from’ not ‘form’ and your ‘I’ should be in capitals
from maddie m
ok