hi joe, In your writing you told us about all the importent differences in ours and their life. This made reading more interesting. When reading it would teach other people lots of new things because your writing is easy to understand
hi joe, a good piece of writing you could be a bit more descriptive like in stead of bad water you could do dirty waterl.
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hi joe,
In your writing you told us about all the importent differences in ours and their life. This made reading more interesting. When reading it would teach other people lots of new things because your writing is easy to understand
hi joe,
a good piece of writing you could be a bit more descriptive like in stead of bad water you could do dirty waterl.