Abasi’s life

Posted on January 13, 2013 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to Abasi’s life

  1. Luke says:
    January 14, 2013 at 9:45 am

    Hi Sam
    Great story, description and punctuation.
    Try and do paragraphs next time.

  2. Rafi11 says:
    January 14, 2013 at 9:50 am

    Hi Sam
    It is really good because you decribed how Abasi felt when he couldnt go to school. Next time remember to put a space after the fullstop.

  3. Matthew says:
    January 14, 2013 at 9:51 am

    Hi Sam

    awesome connectives,but sentences to long!

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