the diffrences between me and Abasi

2 Responses to the diffrences between me and Abasi

1. Luke says:

   January 14, 2013 at 9:49 am

   Hi Matthew
   I like the way how you compared Abasi’s life to your life.
   Try and put apostrophe in Abasi’s name.
2. Lauren says:

   January 14, 2013 at 9:52 am

   Well done on your fall stops.
   You could improve on your capital ‘I’. Your were should be a was because It’s talking about one person. You don’t need a smiley face at the end.
   Well done

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