You have painted a great word picture of the atmosphere in a summer park, suddenly interrupted by an unexpected arrival, and used some really good vocabulary. I could really picture it! Especially the anti-climax when it just turned out to be a slow old van!
You have painted a great word picture of the atmosphere in a summer park, suddenly interrupted by an unexpected arrival, and used some really good vocabulary. I could really picture it! Especially the anti-climax when it just turned out to be a slow old van!