Hi Maddie,
Your brother’s hamster certainly sounds cute!
I have a hamster too called smartie and I have lost him three times!
You have done a great simile when you said his fur is as soft as silk.
Remember when something belongs to someone you need to add a apostrophy (it looks like this ‘ ) like in this writing brothers has a apostrophy after the r and before the s (brother’s).
Exelent work,
from Rosie.
Hi Maddie,
Your brother’s hamster certainly sounds cute!
I have a hamster too called smartie and I have lost him three times!
You have done a great simile when you said his fur is as soft as silk.
Remember when something belongs to someone you need to add a apostrophy (it looks like this ‘ ) like in this writing brothers has a apostrophy after the r and before the s (brother’s).
Exelent work,
from Rosie.