🙂 I like this story you very sneaky saboteur. It seems your booby-trap has made you popular but also a target of the Head Teacher. You have a great sense of a good story. It was fun to read.
This is so well written, I can only suggest one thing. Try to have your entry in a bit early next time. When I look for stories to nominate for the 100WC Showcase, I need to allow a two or three days before the challenge closes to allow the 100WC leader to read nominations and choose four. I would have nominated your story as I was very impressed by it.
Have you or others in your class had the chance to visit and read entries from other schools? If you do, remember to leave a comment for them as I know how good it can feel to have someone else comment on a story. Check the entries for this prompt at… http://100wc.net/?p=369
Hello Jessica,
🙂 I like this story you very sneaky saboteur. It seems your booby-trap has made you popular but also a target of the Head Teacher. You have a great sense of a good story. It was fun to read.
This is so well written, I can only suggest one thing. Try to have your entry in a bit early next time. When I look for stories to nominate for the 100WC Showcase, I need to allow a two or three days before the challenge closes to allow the 100WC leader to read nominations and choose four. I would have nominated your story as I was very impressed by it.
Have you or others in your class had the chance to visit and read entries from other schools? If you do, remember to leave a comment for them as I know how good it can feel to have someone else comment on a story. Check the entries for this prompt at…
http://100wc.net/?p=369
Keep entering the 100WC. 🙂
@RossMannell
Teacher, NSW, Australia