Wow Alex! New York sounds exciting! I like how you used the word ‘finally.’
You were very precise, like when you said that you were in the plane for 8
hours, and you gave the exact day that you went to New York. However,
next time go back and check for spelling. Perhaps you could add some more
5 scenes in too. Well done!!!
Wow Alex! New York sounds exciting! I like how you used the word ‘finally.’
You were very precise, like when you said that you were in the plane for 8
hours, and you gave the exact day that you went to New York. However,
next time go back and check for spelling. Perhaps you could add some more
5 scenes in too. Well done!!!