Thank you for sharing your interesting story. 🙂
Hopefully, the magic wardrobe might be able to save you from being dead meat. I know some people have been caught out on eBay. It’s always safer not to be logged in until you want to buy on eBay and then only when parents have approved.
This is an interesting story, Alfie. The character in your story doesn’t want to accept responsibility for his mistake. That’s something many people try to do. I think your story could be a lesson for the reader to be careful when on line. 🙂
Keep up the good writing, Alfie, but try to remember to stick to the 100 word limit. I hope you keep entering the 100WC.
I think your poem is good because it uses good language and connectives however it dosen’t tell you what happens to the child when his mum dad and sister finds out?
Hello Alfie,
Thank you for sharing your interesting story. 🙂
Hopefully, the magic wardrobe might be able to save you from being dead meat. I know some people have been caught out on eBay. It’s always safer not to be logged in until you want to buy on eBay and then only when parents have approved.
This is an interesting story, Alfie. The character in your story doesn’t want to accept responsibility for his mistake. That’s something many people try to do. I think your story could be a lesson for the reader to be careful when on line. 🙂
Keep up the good writing, Alfie, but try to remember to stick to the 100 word limit. I hope you keep entering the 100WC.
@RossMannell
Teacher, NSW, Australia
I think your poem is good because it uses good language and connectives however it dosen’t tell you what happens to the child when his mum dad and sister finds out?