Well done Sophie! I can imagine you eating sausages on the squelchy sands. You were being clever, using alliterations. Next time go over edit. It’s best to read it out when you’ve finished. As I was out of breath when I finished reading!
Well Done Sophie! I really like how you used lots of alliteration that made the poem still sound very realistic.
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Well done Sophie!
I can imagine you eating sausages on the squelchy sands. You were being clever, using alliterations. Next time go over edit. It’s best to read it out when you’ve finished. As I was out of breath when I finished reading!
Well Done Sophie!
I really like how you used lots of alliteration that made the poem still sound very realistic.