How quickly your lovely morning stroll through the park became a life threatening situation. The once tuneful hooting of birds has been replaced by razor sharp beaked threats. Your entry has the making of a science fiction or horror thriller. Well done. 🙂
The care you have taken with spelling and punctuation, the use of strong descriptive words to help readers picture what is happening, and your creative storyline suggests you are a talented writer. I most certainly hope you keep entering the 100WC. I believe you have many stories to share.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
Hello Daniel,
How quickly your lovely morning stroll through the park became a life threatening situation. The once tuneful hooting of birds has been replaced by razor sharp beaked threats. Your entry has the making of a science fiction or horror thriller. Well done. 🙂
The care you have taken with spelling and punctuation, the use of strong descriptive words to help readers picture what is happening, and your creative storyline suggests you are a talented writer. I most certainly hope you keep entering the 100WC. I believe you have many stories to share.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia