Hi Matilda,
What gave you an inspration to write such a fab story? What age did you set it for? The ideas are very good too. Whinning and thuderous are such a great exspresions. However you shouldv read though and edit next time I got a little confused.
Keep up the great work. Well done!
Hi Matilda,
What gave you an inspration to write such a fab story? What age did you set it for? The ideas are very good too. Whinning and thuderous are such a great exspresions. However you shouldv read though and edit next time I got a little confused.
Keep up the great work. Well done!