100wc week 34

2 Responses to 100wc week 34

1. Daniel J says:

   June 17, 2013 at 10:25 am

   Hi Ben,
   you used really good adjectives to descibe your monster and I liked how you used some diologe. You could of used better scentece starters to improve your work even more
2. julius says:

   June 17, 2013 at 10:35 am

   hi ben
   great work and good adjectives but you did not describe what the moster looked like

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