The Vanishing Tiger

Posted on June 15, 2013 by Deleted User
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5 Responses to The Vanishing Tiger

  1. Hal says:
    June 17, 2013 at 10:22 am

    Thomas u got some fab sentences. Maybe next time you should make it longer 🙂

  2. Lotte says:
    June 17, 2013 at 10:22 am

    Hi Thomas,
    what a cool story, I like your tiger who has
    rocket boosters.

  3. Louis b says:
    June 17, 2013 at 10:23 am

    Hi I like your story good similie next time dont make it so random

  4. Cleo says:
    June 17, 2013 at 10:31 am

    Hi Thomas,
    I like your main story
    I like the way you described tiger in the sky
    But you could use more adjectives verbs and adverbs.

    Cleo

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