The alien Dream

Posted on June 17, 2013 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to The alien Dream

  1. Eusebi says:
    June 18, 2013 at 6:04 pm

    Hi Thomas,
    I like your story I found It quite tense at some bits.Nice. 🙂

    Eusebi

  2. jackson says:
    June 18, 2013 at 7:08 pm

    Thomas
    I like when you describe the street but I think you should describe the UFO as well. 🙂

  3. Fiona (Team 100WC) says:
    June 23, 2013 at 8:44 pm

    Thomas-
    “Casually walking along the gritty, paved street” is a great opener. A good story, which I really enjoyed reading. Keep up the writing.
    Fiona

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