Hi Ben – what a sublime 100wc! This is a dramatic, beautifully-written story that grabs your reader immediately and refuses to let go until the very end. You are not only very creative, but also clearly an excellent technical writer – by that, I mean that you use your punctuation very accurately.
Fabulous writing!
Mr Kenyon (Team 100wc) http://www.ashclass2012-13.blogspot.com
Hi Ben – what a sublime 100wc! This is a dramatic, beautifully-written story that grabs your reader immediately and refuses to let go until the very end. You are not only very creative, but also clearly an excellent technical writer – by that, I mean that you use your punctuation very accurately.
Fabulous writing!
Mr Kenyon (Team 100wc)
http://www.ashclass2012-13.blogspot.com
that was amazing but next time try and put a little part of illiteration in it
Dear Ben
well done this is a very well written story