100WC the ligt was so bright.

Posted on June 22, 2013 by Deleted User
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1 Response to 100WC the ligt was so bright.

  1. Holly says:
    June 25, 2013 at 4:39 pm

    Hi Alfie,

    I really like your story line and the use of emotions, maybe next time you could add more figurative language like really good adjectives and similes.

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