Well Done Thomas
You put lots of description into this story and imagination!
Maybe next time you could tell the reader more about where you were before you went to Antartica.
This is a great piece of writing Thomas. You put lots of description into this work!
Next time check your work through. I noticed you had written i instead of I.
Well Done Thomas
You put lots of description into this story and imagination!
Maybe next time you could tell the reader more about where you were before you went to Antartica.
This is a great piece of writing Thomas. You put lots of description into this work!
Next time check your work through. I noticed you had written i instead of I.