this is very good – well done. good imagination and good use of all the words – it could almost be true. well done ont he style of writing. caroline team 100wc
Hi Maddie,
Well done for using lots of description in your work, I especialy like eyes as black as coal. Also this peice is creative, (what strange polar bears!) but still includes lots of intresting information.
From Rosie.
Dear Maddie
Wow I like how you made it into a inhformation report
From Milla
this is very good – well done. good imagination and good use of all the words – it could almost be true. well done ont he style of writing. caroline team 100wc
Hi Maddie,
Well done for using lots of description in your work, I especialy like eyes as black as coal. Also this peice is creative, (what strange polar bears!) but still includes lots of intresting information.
From Rosie.