Hi Eve
I really like this story it has lots of imagination and funny things going.I really like the Idea of picnics on the beach in November!
From Milla
Wow Eve!!!!!
This is such a creative peice of writing!
I wonder what was causing all the strange weather?
It sounds very nice to be on the beach when it is ment to be a freezing day!
You used brilliant puntuation, well done.
From Rosie.
Hi Eve
I really like this story it has lots of imagination and funny things going.I really like the Idea of picnics on the beach in November!
From Milla
Wow Eve!!!!!
This is such a creative peice of writing!
I wonder what was causing all the strange weather?
It sounds very nice to be on the beach when it is ment to be a freezing day!
You used brilliant puntuation, well done.
From Rosie.