Maddie I really love your acrostic poem – very cool! What a unique and different way to write about the prompt, and I hope you had fun doing it. I wrote acrostic poems myself for a time, just for something different and I enjoyed it. I also loved the positive message you brought forth in your poem, encouraging people to use the recycle bins. You wrote a lovely poem with an even lovelier message – great work!
Hi Maddie
This a really “WOW” factor 100 word challenge. What a fantastic response to this week’s prompt. Your acrostic poem is so artistic while delivering a very strong message about recycling and the importance of it for our environment. You have used some excellent descriptions which make your poem so colourful such as “emerald green”, “could be multicoloured, lighting up the sky” These words create very strong images in my mind. Well done on an excellent piece of writing and I look forward to reading some more of your work in the future.
Ms O’Keeffe (Team 100wc)
Hi Maddie,
I really loved the way you have written your poem and how it delivers a strong message about recycling.You have described the bins in every possible way and have written about it in detail.I also love the way you manage to put ‘RECYCLING BINS AT THE BEACH’ on the side.You have also used lots of descriptive words.
Keep it up!
Maddie I really love your acrostic poem – very cool! What a unique and different way to write about the prompt, and I hope you had fun doing it. I wrote acrostic poems myself for a time, just for something different and I enjoyed it. I also loved the positive message you brought forth in your poem, encouraging people to use the recycle bins. You wrote a lovely poem with an even lovelier message – great work!
Hi Maddie
Well done I really like your story it has lots of good description I expecially like emerald Green
Hi Maddie
This a really “WOW” factor 100 word challenge. What a fantastic response to this week’s prompt. Your acrostic poem is so artistic while delivering a very strong message about recycling and the importance of it for our environment. You have used some excellent descriptions which make your poem so colourful such as “emerald green”, “could be multicoloured, lighting up the sky” These words create very strong images in my mind. Well done on an excellent piece of writing and I look forward to reading some more of your work in the future.
Ms O’Keeffe (Team 100wc)
Ps Two girls in my class often use poetry in their 100 world challenges. They are Lily and Ella and you might like to visit their blogs at http://kidblog.org/msokeeffesclass/author/dcf5f7c3-3601-48b6-beb4-a0afa991ea98/ and http://kidblog.org/msokeeffesclass/author/d4e07c7e-2360-4822-babd-de34fba14d75/
that was EPIC!!! i like youre idea
Hi Maddie,
I really loved the way you have written your poem and how it delivers a strong message about recycling.You have described the bins in every possible way and have written about it in detail.I also love the way you manage to put ‘RECYCLING BINS AT THE BEACH’ on the side.You have also used lots of descriptive words.
Keep it up!