You’ve used the picture prompt to create a really interesting piece of writing, well done. You’ve used some good vocabulary in your writing, I really like “excitedly” and “desperate”. I also like the way you ask yourself a question when the bins move for the first time.
Well done!
Mrs Stones http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/
Hi Hal,
You’ve used the picture prompt to create a really interesting piece of writing, well done. You’ve used some good vocabulary in your writing, I really like “excitedly” and “desperate”. I also like the way you ask yourself a question when the bins move for the first time.
Well done!
Mrs Stones
http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/