Hi,
What an unusual story. Lots happened! You were in a bin lair and wondering whether you’d be going to heaven or to hell.
Your story made me smile when you spoke about the worn-out bin who was twirling his moustache! What an interesting and exciting idea, you really helped me to imagine that with your description.
And I really don’t want to imagine the garbage smell!
Keep writing! Rachel Wills (team 100wc)
Hi Ava
Great Post it had so much imagination and description for where you where I couldn’t stop reading it was amazing I also really like the sentence saying he met my gaze as it is similar to what Stephanie Meyer writes it twilight.
Hi,
What an unusual story. Lots happened! You were in a bin lair and wondering whether you’d be going to heaven or to hell.
Your story made me smile when you spoke about the worn-out bin who was twirling his moustache! What an interesting and exciting idea, you really helped me to imagine that with your description.
And I really don’t want to imagine the garbage smell!
Keep writing! Rachel Wills (team 100wc)
Hi Ava
Great Post it had so much imagination and description for where you where I couldn’t stop reading it was amazing I also really like the sentence saying he met my gaze as it is similar to what Stephanie Meyer writes it twilight.