A very inventive piece of writing, Holly. I love the contrast between the wild ideas of the other children and the ‘small, hopeless, chewed paper-clip’ of the writer. Even the title made me smile.
Great work!
What a wonderful introduction Holly. Describing the different characters and their ideas in the way you did really sparked my curiosity; where was this 100WC going? The difference between their ‘buzzing’ minds and the mental block you seemed to have is beautifully framed and encapsulated in your expression ”…small, hopeless, chewed paper-clip.’
Loved it!
Hi Holly
This is a very interesting piece of writing and my favourite part was when you said “Steve would run the huge playing field 1 million times”. I think this should definitely be in the top ten for the 100 word story. Where did you find this idea to write about?
Hi Holly
I love this writing, it is incredible, it’s awesome that you made up all those projects… it was amazing! I liked how you described everybody’s assignment and how you couldn’t think of anything. It was one of the best 100 word stories I have ever read!!!
From Lachlan
What a great story! Very creative and descriptive!
Keep it up.
A very inventive piece of writing, Holly. I love the contrast between the wild ideas of the other children and the ‘small, hopeless, chewed paper-clip’ of the writer. Even the title made me smile.
Great work!
What a wonderful introduction Holly. Describing the different characters and their ideas in the way you did really sparked my curiosity; where was this 100WC going? The difference between their ‘buzzing’ minds and the mental block you seemed to have is beautifully framed and encapsulated in your expression ”…small, hopeless, chewed paper-clip.’
Loved it!
Hi Holly
This is a very interesting piece of writing and my favourite part was when you said “Steve would run the huge playing field 1 million times”. I think this should definitely be in the top ten for the 100 word story. Where did you find this idea to write about?
From Josh
Hi Holly
I love this writing, it is incredible, it’s awesome that you made up all those projects… it was amazing! I liked how you described everybody’s assignment and how you couldn’t think of anything. It was one of the best 100 word stories I have ever read!!!
From Lachlan
It has an air of mystery which is very appealing. Well done!