But I wonderd what to do

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  1. Chris says:

    Well done, Sophie.
    You have some nice descriptive words in your writing: I liked ‘unstable’ and ‘delicate’, in particular.
    Spelling: check title and think about ‘threw’ and where ‘too’ might go.

    Keep up the good work!

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