WAR BEGINS

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2 Responses to WAR BEGINS

  1. Lauryn says:

    Well done, I like your rhyming words you have used your comas very well.
    You have used paragraphs very well and correctly.
    But you need to have a capital letter at the start and not use to commas after why

  2. Neve says:

    Made me feel sad very lovely poem but use a tiny bit less suspense.

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