Well done, I like your rhyming words you have used your comas very well. You have used paragraphs very well and correctly. But you need to have a capital letter at the start and not use to commas after why
Made me feel sad very lovely poem but use a tiny bit less suspense.
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Well done, I like your rhyming words you have used your comas very well.
You have used paragraphs very well and correctly.
But you need to have a capital letter at the start and not use to commas after why
Made me feel sad very lovely poem but use a tiny bit less suspense.