Wow Grace! This was amazing and I loved how you refered to your family and you, as well as the facts. However I think you should of made the layout – all the steps of the evacuee’s journey. But I did learn a lot of facts about the evacuee’s journey. What were the many changes of the evacuee’s lives?
That was amazing grace you put lots og facts in it I learnt alot about an evacuee, also you made sure the whole thing made sense and you made sure you put capital letters in the right places. On the other-hand you could maybe set out the work a bit more like a piece of writing but other wise your piece of writing was amazing.
Wow Grace! This was amazing and I loved how you refered to your family and you, as well as the facts. However I think you should of made the layout – all the steps of the evacuee’s journey. But I did learn a lot of facts about the evacuee’s journey. What were the many changes of the evacuee’s lives?
Maddie
That was amazing grace you put lots og facts in it I learnt alot about an evacuee, also you made sure the whole thing made sense and you made sure you put capital letters in the right places. On the other-hand you could maybe set out the work a bit more like a piece of writing but other wise your piece of writing was amazing.
Emma