Guys,
This is a truly gripping story and I already am busting for a sequel! You’ve used some great descriptive such as; cascaded and plastered. However, I think you should change the word- ‘tsunamis’ because a tsunami is a very big tidal wave… Keep on blogging these amazing stories though!
Wonderful description, I almost feel that I am there with you. Mrs Southall
Nice work. The descriptions are fantastic! It reminds me of a day very similar to the one you have described.
Vassilis
I also did this
raphael
Guys,
This is a truly gripping story and I already am busting for a sequel! You’ve used some great descriptive such as; cascaded and plastered. However, I think you should change the word- ‘tsunamis’ because a tsunami is a very big tidal wave… Keep on blogging these amazing stories though!