Casper, I like your writing very much and I can tell that you are really sorry and want to help. What you say is very realistic as you mention all the damage that has occurred and lives that are lost. Luckily it wasn’t millions of people that died.
Hi Casper, your writing has a really empathic tone to it, and would be a great source of comfort to one of the child victims of Haiyan. I like how you stay positive, and speak about family and friends being safe. This is important to people who have lost everything. Well done.
Casper, I like your writing very much and I can tell that you are really sorry and want to help. What you say is very realistic as you mention all the damage that has occurred and lives that are lost. Luckily it wasn’t millions of people that died.
Hi Casper, your writing has a really empathic tone to it, and would be a great source of comfort to one of the child victims of Haiyan. I like how you stay positive, and speak about family and friends being safe. This is important to people who have lost everything. Well done.
Hi Ethan, I really like your writing because it is very thoughtful and positive.