Hello Lara! I think your piece is very good as I can tell how much you want to help. It will lift people’s spirit guaranteed. I like the way you tell them to try and focus on getting life back on the road instead of thinking about the downsides.
Wow Lara!
This letter was amazing, and because of that I nearly felt like I was a Philippine child myself! It was very descriptive and probably would make all the Philippines children feel much better about themselves.
Well done,
I can see how much you have tried to cheer a child
up from the Philippines. I like when you said you are working towards
building your life, that was very good!
Hello Lara! I think your piece is very good as I can tell how much you want to help. It will lift people’s spirit guaranteed. I like the way you tell them to try and focus on getting life back on the road instead of thinking about the downsides.
I totally agree!
Such wise words … I would be very cheered by your words.
Louise
lousaka66@o2.co.uk
Wow Lara!
This letter was amazing, and because of that I nearly felt like I was a Philippine child myself! It was very descriptive and probably would make all the Philippines children feel much better about themselves.
Maddie
Well done,
I can see how much you have tried to cheer a child
up from the Philippines. I like when you said you are working towards
building your life, that was very good!
Karen
wow Lara i can see how much effort you put into this piece of writing and how much you want to help them.Your writing is very good.