Hi Bryn,
This is indeed a letter of encouragement. It sure should put the children of Philipines on their feet again as you inform them of the supply ships that are coming.
You however, need to note the difference between ‘know’ (to be aware) and ‘no’ (not) so as to use them correctly in your writings. Well done for a great work.
Olusola Team 100wc. Bankys School, Nigeria
Hi Bryn
I thought it was a lovely piece of writing.I hope the children of the Philippines can read what you have to say.
I also have one slightly negative comment to say some of your spelling and grammar was incorrect.
From Asher
Hi Bryn,
This is indeed a letter of encouragement. It sure should put the children of Philipines on their feet again as you inform them of the supply ships that are coming.
You however, need to note the difference between ‘know’ (to be aware) and ‘no’ (not) so as to use them correctly in your writings. Well done for a great work.
Olusola Team 100wc. Bankys School, Nigeria
Hi Bryn
I thought it was a lovely piece of writing.I hope the children of the Philippines can read what you have to say.
I also have one slightly negative comment to say some of your spelling and grammar was incorrect.
From Asher