Well done Asher! I’m so curious to find out what happens next. I wonder what the ‘buck-toothed’ giant
will do to Jim, kill him, hurt him, anything could happen. You’re a pretty good writer.
Well done, this is a fantastic entry. You use lots of fantastic adjectives and adverbs. My favourite have to be the description of the ‘buck-toothed giant’ and of Tim replying ‘as calmly as he could’. I can just imagine being in a situation of terror but trying to sound calm to help a friend! Well done.
Well done Asher! I’m so curious to find out what happens next. I wonder what the ‘buck-toothed’ giant
will do to Jim, kill him, hurt him, anything could happen. You’re a pretty good writer.
Well done.
Hi Asher
Great story. It has good punctuation and good adjectives.
Well done
Well done, this is a fantastic entry. You use lots of fantastic adjectives and adverbs. My favourite have to be the description of the ‘buck-toothed giant’ and of Tim replying ‘as calmly as he could’. I can just imagine being in a situation of terror but trying to sound calm to help a friend! Well done.