Scott,
I think you did well to create a tense chase and some good description is so few words.
Make sure you focus on your punctuation so everything is clear for the reader.
Were the characters brothers?
Great effort, keep up the good work.
I think your 100wc is interesting and full of action, but I think you could improve it by introducing the characters instead of just writing their names. Also some parts of the story don’t really make sense.
Scott,
I think you did well to create a tense chase and some good description is so few words.
Make sure you focus on your punctuation so everything is clear for the reader.
Were the characters brothers?
Great effort, keep up the good work.
A good effort to create tension and pace in your story, Scott. Just check your work before you publish to correct errors in punctuation or typing.
Hi Scott
I think your 100wc is interesting and full of action, but I think you could improve it by introducing the characters instead of just writing their names. Also some parts of the story don’t really make sense.