Well done Liam. A really good attempt. I notice that it’s all my fault for not realising it’s a leap year! Next time you could try and use some more descriptive words to explain how you felt when you realised that Harry wouldn’t be coming to tea.
Mum
Liam I really enjoyed it especially I wish I wasn’t born on a leap year although you could do with a bit more description
Great story Liam, I thought your ideas where great! Next time remember to use capital letters for names.
Thank you Joseph for the comment I completely agree that I should use Capital letters for names
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Well done Liam. A really good attempt. I notice that it’s all my fault for not realising it’s a leap year! Next time you could try and use some more descriptive words to explain how you felt when you realised that Harry wouldn’t be coming to tea.
Mum
Liam I really enjoyed it especially I wish I wasn’t born on a leap year although you could do with a bit more description
Great story Liam,
I thought your ideas where great! Next time remember to use capital letters for names.
Thank you Joseph for the comment I completely agree that I should use
Capital letters for names