Sophie you have done an excellent job of writing, using wonderful words and phrases to really color your story and make it much more graphic, just like a good comic story. I love how the fist is “the size of a dustbin” and how the character’s hair turns from blonde to white due to fear. Wonderful job of writing, and keep up the good work!
it started of good and then it started to get a bit muddled up!!!!!!!!
Sophie you have done an excellent job of writing, using wonderful words and phrases to really color your story and make it much more graphic, just like a good comic story. I love how the fist is “the size of a dustbin” and how the character’s hair turns from blonde to white due to fear. Wonderful job of writing, and keep up the good work!