Hi Casper,
I really like this, its great!! I think you will get loads of good comments. I liked the sly black cat (what was he going to say?
I also liked the way you described the cat as a model. The only thing i would change is you used ‘I’ too much.
your story is great, I especially liked the bit were you said the cat was walking down the wall ,like a model. I also liked the description used in your story.
Hi Casper,
I really like this, its great!! I think you will get loads of good comments. I liked the sly black cat (what was he going to say?
I also liked the way you described the cat as a model. The only thing i would change is you used ‘I’ too much.
HI Casper,
your story is great, I especially liked the bit were you said the cat was walking down the wall ,like a model. I also liked the description used in your story.