What a funny story. That was smart of you to know that birthdays and other occasions run in a cycle from year to year. You did miss a few words, so next time just proofread it before you submit!
I realy liked your story however you missed a few capitall leters like (then I realized “I forgot it was a leap year.”)
But apart from that it was very good.
Hi, Laila i really liked your story.
That was really good but you missed out a few words.
Hello there!
What a funny story. That was smart of you to know that birthdays and other occasions run in a cycle from year to year. You did miss a few words, so next time just proofread it before you submit!
Well done.
4amWriter/Team 100WC
I realy liked your story however you missed a few capitall leters like (then I realized “I forgot it was a leap year.”)
But apart from that it was very good.