Nice story I like it and great punctuation.
Hello, you have got some good adjectives to describe your forest and house – well done. Check out the homophones hear and here! Nice to leave it on a cliffhanger; it draws your reading into your story. Miss Willing Team 100WC Huntingdon, England
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Nice story I like it and great punctuation.
Hello, you have got some good adjectives to describe your forest and house – well done. Check out the homophones hear and here! Nice to leave it on a cliffhanger; it draws your reading into your story.
Miss Willing
Team 100WC
Huntingdon, England