Hello Billy
Great entry I really liked reading it. I could really imagine what it was like for your Nanna, her sister and brother. You used lots of different sentence openers which made your writing very interesting and enjoyable to read. Have you thought about joining some of your shorter sentences up with conjunctions?
Hello Billy
Great entry I really liked reading it. I could really imagine what it was like for your Nanna, her sister and brother. You used lots of different sentence openers which made your writing very interesting and enjoyable to read. Have you thought about joining some of your shorter sentences up with conjunctions?